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Comm: Appledash summer farm

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summer version of another draw that was NSFW
commission for :iconinvasormkiv: hope you like it ^^
took me all day to finish it o.o even when I is almost the same background as the other
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ehmm yeah non pegasus ponies can be in a cloud with a magic spell :P
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(Sorry for the long comment, I just really, really wanted to critique this. Keep in mind, I almost never critique shipping)

I have a deep respect for ships that can present a relationship without being malicious. I shouldn't have to say just how easy it is to try passing off erotic for romantic.
But a scene presented such as this retains the innocence and intimacy of any other romantic scene. 
But I do have one suggestion. If you keep the ship in the foreground but off-center, the surrounding should be gorgeous and incredibly detailed. What you did was nice, it looks nice, peaceful... but I'm left wanting more. No, expecting more. With a surrounding background like this, I feel you could have just left the couple in the center. I'm not trying to be rude, it just feels that's where the focus should be. 
With a setup like this, I would for a foreground visually stunning and, again I am left wanting more. 
Still, a solid delivery of a nice perspective.
*3.5 STARS*

Cheers,
--Michael